{"id":7822,"date":"2020-06-23T08:00:47","date_gmt":"2020-06-23T01:00:47","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/?p=7822"},"modified":"2024-06-21T10:08:37","modified_gmt":"2024-06-21T03:08:37","slug":"bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-thang-5-2020-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/en\/bai-giai-ielts-writing-task-1-thang-5-2020-band-8-0-tu-ielts-examiner\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS Writing Task 1 Solution (May 2020) Band 8.0+ from IELTS Examiner"},"content":{"rendered":"<div><strong>IELTS Writing d\u1ea1ng \u0111\u1ec1 Mixed gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 c\u00f3 l\u00e0m kh\u00f3 b\u1ea1n? C\u00f9ng \u0111\u1ebfn v\u1edbi b\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i \u0111\u1ed9c quy\u1ec1n c\u1ee7a c\u1ef1u gi\u00e1m kh\u1ea3o IELTS t\u1ea1i ETEST \u0111\u1ec3 h\u1ecdc h\u1ecfi c\u00e1ch ph\u00e2n t\u00edch bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 v\u00e0 di\u1ec5n \u0111\u1ea1t b\u00e0i <a href=\"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/en\/bai-mau-ielts-writing-task-1\/\">Writing Task 1<\/a> m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3.<\/strong><\/div>\n<blockquote>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Task 1:\u00a0<\/strong><\/span><\/span><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>The graphs below give information about the value changes and employment status in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000.<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #9c1619;\"><strong>Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.<\/strong><\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n<div><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-7823 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/image-2-01-283x400.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"283\" height=\"400\" srcset=\"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/image-2-01-283x400.png 283w, https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/image-2-01-768x1087.png 768w, https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/wp-content\/uploads\/2020\/06\/image-2-01-565x800.png 565w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 283px) 100vw, 283px\" \/><\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">The charts below provide a visual summary of the<\/span><b> job prospect<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> and <\/span><b>supply-demand<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> of the United Kingdom\u2019s steel manufacturing industry between 1970 and 2000.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Overall, it can be seen that the demand and production of steel in the UK were much higher at the start of the period than they were at the end. On the contrary, the trend for steel import started low and gradually increased.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Firstly, in 1970, both demand and production were particularly high, sitting at 200,000 and roughly 160,000 respectively. For the next 20 years, production had decreased to a level of approximately 90,000 before declining slightly to around 80,000. During that same period, demand also fell to 100,000. Steel import began at nearly zero; however, by the 1990\u2019s, it had been up to 50,000, finally ending at just under 70,000.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Turning into the second chart, employment in the steel industry was at 50,000 in 1970. However, this quickly began to decrease. By 1980, this figure had been down to 40,000, and ten years later it was halved. At the end of the period, the employment rate was all the way down to roughly 16,000.<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div><em>( Count: 189 words)<\/em><\/div>\n<div>\n<p dir=\"ltr\"><em>Useful phrases that appear in the article:<\/em><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>job-prospect<\/strong> : tri\u1ec3n v\u1ecdng v\u1ec1 c\u00f4ng vi\u1ec7c<\/li>\n<li dir=\"ltr\"><strong>supply-demand<\/strong> : cung-c\u1ea7u<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<blockquote>\n<div>Tham kh\u1ea3o chi ti\u1ebft ch\u01b0\u01a1ng tr\u00ecnh IELTS \u1edf ETEST v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ec3 nh\u1eadn l\u1ed9 tr\u00ecnh h\u1ecdc IELTS c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n h\u00f3a ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p v\u1edbi m\u1ee5c ti\u00eau v\u00e0 ki\u1ec3m tra IELTS mi\u1ec5n ph\u00ed t\u1ea1i\u00a0Anh Ng\u1eef Du H\u1ecdc ETEST<\/div>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p><center><a href=\"https:\/\/demo.puramu.dev\/en\/khoa-hoc\/luyen-thi-ielts\/\" target=\"_self\" class=\"button primary is-outline\"  style=\"border-radius:10px;\">\n    <span>IELTS Course<\/span>\n  <\/a>\n<\/center><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-bottom\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;7822&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;bottom&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;\u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;0\\\/5 - (0 votes)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;B\u00e0i gi\u1ea3i IELTS Writing Task 1 (Th\u00e1ng 5\\\/2020) Band 8.0+ t\u1eeb IELTS Examiner&quot;,&quot;width&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;_legend&quot;:&quot;{score}\\\/{best} - ({count} {votes})&quot;,&quot;font_factor&quot;:&quot;1.25&quot;}'>\n            \n<div class=\"kksr-stars\">\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-inactive\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"1\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"2\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"3\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"4\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"5\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-active\" style=\"width: 0px;\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                \n\n<div class=\"kksr-legend\" style=\"font-size: 19.2px;\">\n            <span class=\"kksr-muted\">Rate this article<\/span>\n    <\/div>\n    <\/div>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>IELTS Writing d\u1ea1ng \u0111\u1ec1 Mixed gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c bi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ed3 c\u00f3 l\u00e0m kh\u00f3 b\u1ea1n? 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